[help] Minimal proofreading, deferring some reviews to after 2.28.0

diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page b/help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page
index 845f7e74b9e30a131143366a5ad6999151e43dc6..bbf6e547e77cb1a204665f0d97fab164b2d04699 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page
@@ -1,13 +1,18 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="geolocation-not-showing">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic"
+      id="geolocation-not-showing">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="geolocation#problems"/>
     <desc>
       <app>Empathy</app> does not publish my geographical position.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>

diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page b/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
index 23694e2b741996fe6c58ba6bc39ed3e4d41bc37f..de5a5b2f751e7cdcbb76f0105fe80ddb18b26cad 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
@@ -1,13 +1,18 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="geolocation-privacy">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic"
+      id="geolocation-privacy">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="geolocation#geoloc"/>
     <desc>
       What information are sent and to who.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
@@ -19,10 +24,10 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Geolocation privacy</title>
+  <title>Geolocation Privacy</title>
 
   <section id="info-sent">
-  <title>What are the information sent</title>
+  <title>What information is sent</title>
   <p>
     What is possible to send is: your country, region, locality, area, street, building,
     floor, room, and postal code, longitude, latitude and altitude, speed and bearing.

diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-supported.page b/help/C/geolocation-supported.page
index f67b43755cd7725ca4f992b97003dd622a5efbe6..73c2ea16454748fc5bf5980d846b3ff3dc3da0be 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/geolocation-supported.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-supported.page
@@ -1,12 +1,17 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="geolocation-supported">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic"
+      id="geolocation-supported">
 
   <info>
     <desc>
       Services that supports geolocation and compatibility.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="draft">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>

diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-turn.page b/help/C/geolocation-turn.page
index 6c01be90b4de4e5f453b98bc599fa6888e9d01b0..984a281838feb29a08808484e9c0929709358eb5 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/geolocation-turn.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-turn.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="geolocation-turn">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="geolocation-turn">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="geolocation#geoloc"/>
@@ -8,7 +9,11 @@
     <desc>
       How to activate and deactivate geolocation in <app>Empathy</app>.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>

diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-what-is.page b/help/C/geolocation-what-is.page
index 77fcff8dd8e0ea5268d0feaccba0c92ebd02ed03..2e8163bf222b0bb632d2f3294cba9092161c143d 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/geolocation-what-is.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-what-is.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="geolocation-what-is">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic"
+      id="geolocation-what-is">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="geolocation#geoloc"/>
@@ -8,7 +9,11 @@
     <desc>
       Understanding geolocation.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
@@ -22,36 +27,34 @@
 
   <title>What is geolocation</title>
 
-  <p>
-    With <em>geolocation</em> it is intended the possibility to identify the real
-    geographical position of a computer or a device connected to the Internet.
-  </p>
+  <p>Geolocation allows you to identify the real geographical location of a
+  computer or a device connected to the Internet.</p>
   <p>
     With geolocation in <app>Empathy</app> you can:
   </p>
   <list>
     <item>
       <p>
-        Publish your geographical position to your contacts.
+        Publish your geographical location to your contacts.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-        See your contacts geographical position and quickly contact them.
+        See your contacts’ geographical location and quickly contact them.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-        Set the accuracy of your position and the device used to discover your
-        position.
+        Set the accuracy of your location and the device used to discover your
+        location.
       </p>
     </item>
   </list>
 
   <note style="tip">
     <p>
-      In order to see your contacts geographical position, they need to use a
-      service and an application that support geolocation.
+      In order to see your contacts’ geographical locations, they need to use a
+      service and an application that supports geolocation.
     </p>
   </note>
 

diff --git a/help/C/geolocation.page b/help/C/geolocation.page
index 409d22f493292da0e705d1c97b277b4c343a37aa..bdb9640127c37385bbd54c7748a7b5fc31e02e05 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/geolocation.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation.page
@@ -1,14 +1,18 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="guide"
-  id="geolocation"
-  style="2colum">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="guide" style="2column"
+      id="geolocation">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#advanced"/>
     <desc>
       Use and understand geolocation in <app>Empathy</app>.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-01" status="done"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>

diff --git a/help/C/group-conversations.page b/help/C/group-conversations.page
index df779e71a6845166e5b547063765a4ee43a4d5f5..5955f90d13aa637b7224941ee9908aa6af7c40a6 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/group-conversations.page
+++ b/help/C/group-conversations.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="group-conversations">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic"
+      id="group-conversations">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#text-conv"/>
@@ -9,7 +10,11 @@
     </desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-02" status="stub"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-17" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-17" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-17" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>

diff --git a/help/C/salut-protocol.page b/help/C/salut-protocol.page
index 274e84e68a8cf841960f9368979cbbee9805336d..5577814d33118bd51f11035397786e9d8745382b 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/salut-protocol.page
+++ b/help/C/salut-protocol.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
       type="topic"
       id="salut-protocol">
 
@@ -8,7 +9,11 @@
       Undesrtanding the People Nearby feature.
     </desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-12" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>

diff --git a/help/C/send-file.page b/help/C/send-file.page
index cd1d6ead990fe8de3cc08c8d0631f8f25cb45b55..90d17eab89bd40bf2a4510441940421ff52f82ae 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/send-file.page
+++ b/help/C/send-file.page
@@ -1,13 +1,18 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="send-file">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic"
+      id="send-file">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#advanced"/>
     <desc>Send a file from your computer to one of your contacts.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-14" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-07-21" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
@@ -33,7 +38,7 @@
       <list>
         <item>
           <p>
-            Right-click on the contact you want to send a file, and choose <gui>Send file</gui>.
+            Right click on the contact you want to send a file to, and choose <gui>Send file</gui>.
           </p>
         </item>
         <item>

diff --git a/help/C/send-message.page b/help/C/send-message.page
index bdcfe691256fde5227eee31c9e3c13fdc53bfc7b..49ee85668b1f71f03f7db69afd3c812a338bedb4 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/send-message.page
+++ b/help/C/send-message.page
@@ -1,12 +1,17 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="send-message">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic"
+      id="send-message">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#text-conv"/>
     <desc>Send a message to one of your contacts.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-14" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
@@ -28,7 +33,7 @@
       <list>
         <item>
           <p>
-            Double-click the name of the contact that you want to have a conversation
+            Double click the name of the contact that you want to have a conversation
             with.
           </p>
         </item>