Rework some sections

diff --git a/help/C/change_status.page b/help/C/change_status.page
index a6d13eb054dbe568d155642d534c623921535826..c892e4f53439300aba51ac3a5ce8f79aa40a7510 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/change_status.page
+++ b/help/C/change_status.page
@@ -1,38 +1,39 @@
 <page xmlns="http://www.gnome.org/~shaunm/mallard"
 <page xmlns="http://www.gnome.org/~shaunm/mallard"

-      type="guide"
-      id="change_status">
-
-<info>
-  <link type="guide" xref="index#talk"/>
-  <desc>Change your status, if you are going away from your computer for example.</desc>
-  <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
-
-  <credit type="author">
-    <name>Phil Bull</name>
-    <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
-  </credit>
-  <copyright>
-    <year>2009</year>
-    <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-  </copyright>
-
+  type="guide"
+  id="change_status">
+  
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#talk"/>
+    <desc>Change your status, if you are going away from your computer for example.</desc>
+    <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
+    
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Phil Bull</name>
+      <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <copyright>
+      <year>2009</year>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
+    </copyright>
+    

     <license>Creative Commons Share Alike</license>
     <license>Creative Commons Share Alike</license>

-
+    

   <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 </info>
 
   <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 </info>
 

-

 <title>How can I change my status?</title>
 
 <title>How can I change my status?</title>
 

-<p>
-Click the drop-down list at the top of the main <app>Empathy</app> window and 
-select a status from the list. For example, if you are busy and do not want to 
-be disturbed, select <gui>Busy</gui>.
-</p>
-
-<p>
-If you do not use your computer for a while, Empathy will automatically set 
-your status to <gui>Away</gui>.
-</p>
+  <p>
+    Click the drop-down list at the top of the main <app>Empathy</app> window and 
+    select a status from the list. For example, if you are busy and do not want to 
+    be disturbed, select <gui>Busy</gui>.
+  </p>
+  
+  <note>
+    <p>
+      If you do not use your computer for a while, Empathy will automatically set 
+      your status to <gui>Away</gui>.
+    </p>
+  </note>  

 
 </page>
 
 </page>

diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 6fdf16dedb255f7afa94c7c655f47348f226f1e0..f6be5ccc97a1232859650b8bc7a8c0854b47f0fa 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="add-account"/>
     
     <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="add-account"/>
     

-    <desc>Create an account with one of the supported services.</desc>
+    <desc>Register an account with one of the supported services.</desc>

     <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
     <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
 
     <credit type="author">


@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
   </comment>
 
 
   </comment>
 
 

-  <title>How can I create an account?</title>
+  <title>How can I register a new account?</title>

   
   <p>
     You can freely create an account on any of the following
   
   <p>
     You can freely create an account on any of the following

diff --git a/help/C/send_message.page b/help/C/send_message.page
index 54373ac171cd4eb0ae549e926e860080c09a0386..496341aec0612d2daafcde9c786788ce28838574 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/send_message.page
+++ b/help/C/send_message.page
@@ -2,27 +2,53 @@
       type="guide"
       id="send_message">
 
       type="guide"
       id="send_message">
 

-<info>
-  <link type="guide" xref="index#talk"/>
-  <desc>Send a message to one of your contacts.</desc>
-  <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
-
-  <credit type="author">
-    <name>Phil Bull</name>
-    <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
-  </credit>
-  <copyright>
-    <year>2009</year>
-    <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-  </copyright>
-
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#talk"/>
+    <desc>Send a message to one of your contacts.</desc>
+    <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
+    
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Phil Bull</name>
+      <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <copyright>
+      <year>2009</year>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
+    </copyright>
+    

     <license>Creative Commons Share Alike</license>
     <license>Creative Commons Share Alike</license>

-
-  <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-</info>
-
-<title>How can I send a message to someone?</title>
-
-<p>In the main Empathy window, double-click the name of the contact that you want to chat with. Alternatively, right-click their name and click <gui>Chat</gui>. A chat window will open. Type a message into the box at the bottom of the window and press <key>Enter</key> to send it to your contact.</p>
-
+    
+    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+  </info>
+  
+  <title>How can I send a message to someone?</title>
+  
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+       From the main window of Empathy, perform one of the following:
+      </p>
+      <list>
+       <item>
+         <p>
+           Double-click the name of the contact that you want to chat
+           with
+         </p>
+       </item>
+       <item>
+         <p>
+           Right-click their name and click <gui>Chat</gui>
+         </p>
+       </item>
+      </list>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+       A chat window will open. Type a message into the box at the
+       bottom of the window and press <key>Enter</key> to send it to
+       your contact.
+      </p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+  

 </page>
 </page>