[help] Minor language tweaks to updated content

[empathy.git] / help / C / irc-join-pwd.page

diff --git a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
index b8fd52afb5fc02e6d0c096626dbfbdea9a91d3e8..f883094bc00940ef79d3c0c2edebf52157f9716f 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
@@ -26,20 +26,18 @@
 
   <p>
     On some IRC networks, private IRC rooms may be protected with a password.
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    To join such a room, if you know the password:
+    If you know the password, use the following steps to join:
   </p>
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>
-        <link xref="irc-join-room">Join the room</link>.
+        <link xref="irc-join-room">Join the room</link> as normal.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-        In the <gui>This room is protected by a password</gui> text box, type the
-        IRC room password, and click on <gui style="button">Join</gui>.
+        Empathy will prompt you for a password. Enter the password for the
+        IRC chat room and click <gui style="button">Join</gui>.
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>