<section id="facebook">
<title>Facebook</title>
<p>
- Facebook is one of the most used social network. It provides users with
- the opportunity to create their own profile, and to communicate with their
- friends.
+ Facebook is one of the most-used social networks. It allows users to
+ create their own profile and to communicate with their friends.
</p>
<p>
- In order to use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need
+ To use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need
to create a new account from the website:
<link href="http://www.facebook.com">www.facebook.com</link>.
</p>
<p>
On some IRC networks, private IRC rooms may be protected with a password.
- </p>
- <p>
- To join such a room, if you know the password:
+ If you know the password, use the following steps to join:
</p>
<steps>
<item>
<p>
- <link xref="irc-join-room">Join the room</link>.
+ <link xref="irc-join-room">Join the room</link> as normal.
</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>
- In the <gui>This room is protected by a password</gui> text box, type the
- IRC room password, and click on <gui style="button">Join</gui>.
+ Empathy will prompt you for a password. Enter the password for the
+ IRC chat room and click <gui style="button">Join</gui>.
</p>
</item>
</steps>