[help] Minor language tweaks to updated content

[empathy.git] / help / C / create-account.page

diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 19232e80629abd3d54ab73f6807fb4b9eeee1361..404172a32ce158b4a44073ebbb6871a134cc3614 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -45,12 +45,11 @@
   <section id="facebook">
     <title>Facebook</title>
     <p>
-      Facebook is one of the most used social network.  It provides users with 
-      the opportunity to create their own profile, and to communicate with their
-      friends. 
+      Facebook is one of the most-used social networks.  It allows users to
+      create their own profile and to communicate with their friends. 
     </p>
     <p>
-      In order to use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need 
+      To use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need 
       to create a new account from the website: 
       <link href="http://www.facebook.com">www.facebook.com</link>.
     </p>