[help] update <comment>/<cite> tag contents to match current Mallard spec

[empathy.git] / help / C / prob-conn.page

diff --git a/help/C/prob-conn.page b/help/C/prob-conn.page
index 0fed7a2f39d09ecf7943f3f8a8cc22b48f1eb46c..e9ec2382d58c064d608d65460034db12d1f5d029 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/prob-conn.page
+++ b/help/C/prob-conn.page
@@ -5,9 +5,10 @@
 <info>
   <link type="guide" xref="index#problems"/>
   <desc>
-    Diagnose common problems with connecting to an instant messaging service.
+    Diagnose common problems connecting to an instant messaging service.
   </desc>
-  <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-17" status="stub"/>
+  <revision version="0.1" date="2009-06-17" status="draft"/>
+  <revision version="0.2" date="2009-07-26" status="draft"/>
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Phil Bull</name>
     <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
@@ -17,22 +18,25 @@
     <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
   </copyright>
 
-  <license>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</license>
-
   <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 </info>
 
-<title>I have a problem connecting to an instant messaging service</title>
+<title>Problems connecting to an instant messaging service</title>
 
 <comment>
-    <cite date="2009-06-14"><name>Phil Bull</name></cite>
+    <cite date="2009-06-14">Phil Bull</cite>
     <p>This is a stub. We should identify the most common causes for a user not 
     being able to connect and document those.</p>
 </comment>
 
 <comment>
-    <cite date="2009-06-17"><name>Phil Bull</name></cite>
-    <p>Check whether gui tags are allowed in section titles and descs.</p>
+  <cite date="2009-06-17">Phil Bull</cite>
+  <p>Check whether gui tags are allowed in section titles and descs.</p>
+  <cite date="2009-07-26">Milo Casagrande</cite>
+  <p>
+    You can... but the end result is not very good: the title is in blue and the
+    gui element in grey.
+  </p>
 </comment>
 
 </page>