Merge branch 'gnome-3-8'

[empathy.git] / help / C / irc-join-room.page

diff --git a/help/C/irc-join-room.page b/help/C/irc-join-room.page
index 379399267959ef67193d7f1a3da21ac29c6edaae..8a3a74d2e462f1e3ce312d632d7ce79d5f53cddf 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/irc-join-room.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-join-room.page
@@ -1,25 +1,38 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="irc-join-room">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallrd.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="irc-join-room">
 
   <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#manage"/>
-    <desc>Entering an IRC channel.</desc>
+    <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#manage" group="one"/>
+    <desc>Join an IRC channel.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-07-26" status="draft"/>
-
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
     </credit>
+    <license>
+      <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
+    </license>    
+<!--
     <copyright>
       <year>2009</year>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
     </copyright>
-
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+-->
   </info>
 
-  <title>Join a room</title>
+  <title>Join an IRC chat room</title>
+
+  <p>You can join IRC chat rooms (also known as IRC channels) on any IRC network you’re
+  connected to.  To connect to an IRC network, see <link xref="add-account"/> and
+  <link xref="account-irc"/>.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -37,17 +50,17 @@
     <item>
       <p>
         In the <gui>Room</gui> text box, type the name of the channel you want to
-        join. Prefix the name with the hash character (<sys>#</sys>).
+        join. IRC channel names start with the hash character (<sys>#</sys>).
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-        Click on <gui>Join</gui> to enter the room.
+        Click <gui>Join</gui> to enter the room.
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note>
+  <note style="tip">
     <p>
       To join multiple rooms, you need to repeat the steps above for each room.
     </p>