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[empathy.git] / help / C / disable-account.page

diff --git a/help/C/disable-account.page b/help/C/disable-account.page
index f24c0f48fe1e3e713ef540a2146319057a001912..6fbae8590b2b2708703e6fc0a6779732b373a71e 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/disable-account.page
+++ b/help/C/disable-account.page
@@ -1,21 +1,26 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="disable-account">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="disable-account">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="remove-account"/>
-    <desc>
-      Prevent an account from logging-in automatically when you start
-      <app>Empathy</app>.
-    </desc>
+    <desc>Prevent <app>Empathy</app> from automatically logging in to an account.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-14" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.3" date="2009-08-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.4" date="2009-08-31" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Shaun McCance</name>
+      <email>shaunm@gnome.org</email>
+    </credit>
     <copyright>
       <year>2009</year>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -25,48 +30,33 @@
 
   <title>Disable an account</title>
 
-  <p>
-    Disabling an account means to deactivate it, temporarily or
-     permanently. All the conversations you had will be kept in your computer.
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    After disabling an account, it is possible to enable it again.
-  </p>
+  <p>You can disable an account to prevent <app>Empathy</app> from logging in to
+  it without removing the account entirely.  You may wish to disable and re-enable
+  an account if you only want to be logged in to the account at certain times,
+  but you still want to use <app>Empathy</app> for other accounts.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        From the <gui>Contact List</gui> window, perform one of the following:
-      </p>
-      <list>
-             <item>
-               <p>
-                 Press <key>F4</key>.
-          </p>
-        </item>
-        <item>
-          <p>
-            Choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>.
-          </p>
-        </item>
-      </list>
+      <p>From the <gui>Contact List</gui> window, choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui>
+      <gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>, or press <key>F4</key>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Select the account you wish to disable from the box on the
-        left of the dialog.
-      </p>
+      <p>Select the account you wish to disable from the accounts list on the left
+      side of the window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Deselect the <gui style="checkbox">Enabled</gui> check-box.
-      </p>
+      <p>Deselect <gui style="checkbox">Enabled</gui> on the right side of the
+      window.  This option is after your primary account details, but before
+      any advanced settings.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-        Click on <gui style="button">Apply</gui>.
+        Click <gui style="button">Apply</gui>.
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>To re-enable the account, simply select <gui style="checkbox">Enabled</gui>
+  and click <gui>Apply</gui>.</p>
+
 </page>