Merge branch 'gnome-3-8'

[empathy.git] / help / C / add-contact.page

diff --git a/help/C/add-contact.page b/help/C/add-contact.page
index fbde28774f7075576e633923e044522feb858a2e..3426cd6fc30bdb361f08c283656c0034b90586d0 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/add-contact.page
+++ b/help/C/add-contact.page
@@ -1,60 +1,58 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="add-contact">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="add-contact">
 
   <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
-    <link type="seealso" xref="offline-contacts"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#contacts"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="hide-contacts"/>
     <desc>Add someone to the contact list.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-15" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.3" date="2009-09-05" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
     </credit>
+    <license>
+      <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
+    </license>    
+<!--
     <copyright>
       <year>2009</year>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
     </copyright>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+-->
   </info>
 
   <title>Add someone to your list of contacts</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2009-06-15">Phil Bull</cite>
-    <p>Instructions need review, didn't test with other IM services to confirm
-      the names of the textboxes. Also, check the name of the Add button.</p>
-  </comment>
-
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Choose <guiseq><gui>Chat</gui><gui>Add Contact</gui></guiseq>.
-      </p>
+      <p>Choose <guiseq><gui>Chat</gui><gui>Add Contact</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        From the <gui>Account</gui> drop-down list, select the type of
-         service the person you want to add to your contacts is using.
-      </p>
+      <p>From the <gui>Account</gui> drop-down list, select the account you wish
+      to use to connect to your contact.  Your contact will need to be using the
+      same service as the account you select.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        In the <gui>Identifier</gui> text box, type the email address
-         or the username of the person you want to add to your
-         contacts list.
-      </p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Identifier</gui> field, enter your contact’s login ID, username,
+      screen name, or other appropriate identifier for the service type.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        In the <gui>Alias</gui> text box, type their name.
-      </p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Alias</gui> field, type your contact’s name as you would like
+      it to appear in your contact list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
         Click <gui>Add</gui> to add the person to your list of
-         contacts.
+        contacts.
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
@@ -62,7 +60,7 @@
   <note>
     <p>
       To add a new person to your list of contacts, you need to be
-       connected to the Internet and to your account.
+      connected to the Internet and to your account.
     </p>
   </note>