From 871a256b4eda943d1924bde6109f66197be060ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Harold Schreckengost <mewshi@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 2 May 2010 18:20:49 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] [help] Fixed some typos

---
 help/C/create-account.page |  2 +-
 help/C/introduction.page   | 17 +++++------------
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 404172a3..4aa01710 100644
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 
   <p>This page provides information on creating a new account for various types of
   accounts.  Your account provider should give you a login ID and a password, as well
-  as any additional information you need to connect with <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+  as any additional information you need to connect using <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
   
   <section id="facebook">
     <title>Facebook</title>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 2d334f61..e7f96b89 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -15,21 +15,14 @@
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
-    </license>    
-<!--
-    <copyright>
-      <year>2009</year>
-      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-    </copyright>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
--->
+    </license>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
   <p>
     <app>Empathy</app> is an instant messaging application for the GNOME Desktop.
-    It supports text messaging, voice &amp; video call, file transfers and all the
+    It supports text messaging, voice &amp; video calls, file transfers, and all the
     most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
   </p>
   <p>
@@ -37,9 +30,9 @@
     and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.  
   </p>
   <p>
-    You can group all the conversations in a single window, have multiple windows for
-    different kind of conversations, easily search through your previous conversations and
-    share your desktop in just two clicks.
+    Using <app>Empathy</app>, you can group all the conversations in a single window,
+    have multiple windows for different kind of conversations, easily search through
+    your previous conversations, and share your desktop in just two clicks.
   </p>
 
   <figure>
-- 
2.39.2