From 1141d65da420328c1f6ba7373c53a2bf554abcc9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Milo Casagrande <milo@ubuntu.com>
Date: Sun, 14 Jun 2009 22:51:52 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Rework some sections

---
 help/C/change_status.page  | 59 ++++++++++++++++----------------
 help/C/create-account.page |  4 +--
 help/C/send_message.page   | 70 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++------------
 3 files changed, 80 insertions(+), 53 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/change_status.page b/help/C/change_status.page
index a6d13eb0..c892e4f5 100644
--- a/help/C/change_status.page
+++ b/help/C/change_status.page
@@ -1,38 +1,39 @@
 <page xmlns="http://www.gnome.org/~shaunm/mallard"
-      type="guide"
-      id="change_status">
-
-<info>
-  <link type="guide" xref="index#talk"/>
-  <desc>Change your status, if you are going away from your computer for example.</desc>
-  <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
-
-  <credit type="author">
-    <name>Phil Bull</name>
-    <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
-  </credit>
-  <copyright>
-    <year>2009</year>
-    <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-  </copyright>
-
+  type="guide"
+  id="change_status">
+  
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#talk"/>
+    <desc>Change your status, if you are going away from your computer for example.</desc>
+    <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
+    
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Phil Bull</name>
+      <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <copyright>
+      <year>2009</year>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
+    </copyright>
+    
     <license>Creative Commons Share Alike</license>
-
+    
   <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 </info>
 
-
 <title>How can I change my status?</title>
 
-<p>
-Click the drop-down list at the top of the main <app>Empathy</app> window and 
-select a status from the list. For example, if you are busy and do not want to 
-be disturbed, select <gui>Busy</gui>.
-</p>
-
-<p>
-If you do not use your computer for a while, Empathy will automatically set 
-your status to <gui>Away</gui>.
-</p>
+  <p>
+    Click the drop-down list at the top of the main <app>Empathy</app> window and 
+    select a status from the list. For example, if you are busy and do not want to 
+    be disturbed, select <gui>Busy</gui>.
+  </p>
+  
+  <note>
+    <p>
+      If you do not use your computer for a while, Empathy will automatically set 
+      your status to <gui>Away</gui>.
+    </p>
+  </note>  
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 6fdf16de..f6be5ccc 100644
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="add-account"/>
     
-    <desc>Create an account with one of the supported services.</desc>
+    <desc>Register an account with one of the supported services.</desc>
     <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
   </comment>
 
 
-  <title>How can I create an account?</title>
+  <title>How can I register a new account?</title>
   
   <p>
     You can freely create an account on any of the following
diff --git a/help/C/send_message.page b/help/C/send_message.page
index 54373ac1..496341ae 100644
--- a/help/C/send_message.page
+++ b/help/C/send_message.page
@@ -2,27 +2,53 @@
       type="guide"
       id="send_message">
 
-<info>
-  <link type="guide" xref="index#talk"/>
-  <desc>Send a message to one of your contacts.</desc>
-  <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
-
-  <credit type="author">
-    <name>Phil Bull</name>
-    <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
-  </credit>
-  <copyright>
-    <year>2009</year>
-    <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-  </copyright>
-
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#talk"/>
+    <desc>Send a message to one of your contacts.</desc>
+    <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-14" status="stub"/>
+    
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Phil Bull</name>
+      <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <copyright>
+      <year>2009</year>
+      <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
+    </copyright>
+    
     <license>Creative Commons Share Alike</license>
-
-  <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-</info>
-
-<title>How can I send a message to someone?</title>
-
-<p>In the main Empathy window, double-click the name of the contact that you want to chat with. Alternatively, right-click their name and click <gui>Chat</gui>. A chat window will open. Type a message into the box at the bottom of the window and press <key>Enter</key> to send it to your contact.</p>
-
+    
+    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+  </info>
+  
+  <title>How can I send a message to someone?</title>
+  
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+	From the main window of Empathy, perform one of the following:
+      </p>
+      <list>
+	<item>
+	  <p>
+	    Double-click the name of the contact that you want to chat
+	    with
+	  </p>
+	</item>
+	<item>
+	  <p>
+	    Right-click their name and click <gui>Chat</gui>
+	  </p>
+	</item>
+      </list>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+	A chat window will open. Type a message into the box at the
+	bottom of the window and press <key>Enter</key> to send it to
+	your contact.
+      </p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+  
 </page>
-- 
2.39.2