From: David King <amigadave@amigadave.com>
Date: Tue, 7 Oct 2014 10:21:17 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: help: Review add-account.page
X-Git-Url: https://git.0d.be/?p=empathy.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=3b6777c7fcd24ef5d65feb327f9e32fb4929d738;hp=2b28e310869b6bb823528d7ac1e12c179ac00f28

help: Review add-account.page

https://mail.gnome.org/archives/docs-feedback/2014-September/msg00046.html
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diff --git a/help/C/add-account.page b/help/C/add-account.page
index cdeb4b8d..252b0b38 100644
--- a/help/C/add-account.page
+++ b/help/C/add-account.page
@@ -17,6 +17,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.3" date="2010-02-03" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.4" date="2010-04-19" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.2" version="0.5" date="2011-12-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12.6" date="2014-10-07" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
@@ -46,8 +47,8 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>From the <gui>Contact List</gui> window, choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui>
-      <gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>, or press <key>F4</key>.</p>
+      <p>Click <guiseq><gui>Empathy</gui><gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>, or press
+      <key>F4</key>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
@@ -55,15 +56,8 @@
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the <gui>Protocol</gui> drop-down list, select the type of account you wish
-      to add.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>If you do not already have a registered account, select
-      <gui>Create a new account on the server</gui>.
-      This feature is not available for all account types, and may not work with
-      some account providers.  See <link xref="create-account"/> for more
-      information.</p>
+      <p>From the <gui>What kind of chat account do you have?</gui> drop-down
+      list, select the type of account you wish to add.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Enter the required information.  For most accounts, you will only need
@@ -71,16 +65,14 @@
       See <link xref="accounts-window#details"/>for more information.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Click <gui style="button">Apply</gui>.
-      </p>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">Add</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>To change the name that identifies the account in the <gui>Accounts</gui>
-    window, select the account from the list on the left and either click on the
-    name or press the space bar.  Edit the account name and press <key>Enter</key>
-    when you’re finished.</p>
+    <p>To change the name that identifies the account in the <gui>Messaging and
+    VoIP Accounts</gui> window, select the account from the list on the left
+    and either click on the name or press the space bar. Edit the account name
+    and press <key>Enter</key> when you’re finished.</p>
   </note>
 </page>