help: Review add-account.page

[empathy.git] / help / C / add-account.page

diff --git a/help/C/add-account.page b/help/C/add-account.page
index 99a6d35dcfbc38a901f1c344b6833ac22ea07642..252b0b388a186e6c95761b50d4d5e3a38fe1b89f 100644 (file)
--- a/help/C/add-account.page
+++ b/help/C/add-account.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-      type="topic" style="task"
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="guide" style="task"
       id="add-account">
 
   <info>
@@ -8,7 +9,15 @@
     <desc>Add a new account to <app>Empathy</app>.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-24" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-10" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-27" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.3" date="2010-02-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.4" date="2010-04-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" version="0.5" date="2011-12-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12.6" date="2014-10-07" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
@@ -17,11 +26,16 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm@gnome.org</email>
     </credit>
+    <license>
+      <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
+    </license>
+<!--
     <copyright>
       <year>2009</year>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
     </copyright>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+-->
   </info>
 
   <title>Add a new account</title>
@@ -33,50 +47,32 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>From the <gui>Contact List</gui> window, choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui>
-      <gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>, or press <key>F4</key>.</p>
+      <p>Click <guiseq><gui>Empathy</gui><gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>, or press
+      <key>F4</key>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Add</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>
+        Click <gui style="button">+</gui>.
+      </p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the <gui>Add new</gui> drop-down list, select the type of account you wish
-      to add.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>If you do not already have a registered account, select <gui>Create a new account</gui>.
-      This feature is not available for all account types, and may not work with some account
-      providers.  See <link xref="create-account"/> for more information.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Create</gui>.</p>
+      <p>From the <gui>What kind of chat account do you have?</gui> drop-down
+      list, select the type of account you wish to add.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Enter the required information.  For most accounts, you will only need
       a login ID and a password.  Some accounts may require additional information.
-      See <link xref="accounts-window#details"/> for more information.</p>
+      See <link xref="accounts-window#details"/>for more information.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui style="button">Connect</gui> to enable the new account.</p>
-
-      <!-- TODO: check if it's a bug or what. In case, this part needs to
-      be removed or we must signal it as a bug! -->
-
-      <note style="warning">
-        <p>If you close the <gui>Accounts</gui> window without clicking
-        <gui>Connect</gui>, the entire account will be lost, and you will
-        need to create it again.</p>
-        <p>If you select another account without clicking <gui>Connect</gui>,
-        any information you have entered will be lost.</p>
-      </note>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">Add</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>To change the name the identifies the account in the <gui>Accounts</gui>
-    window, select the account from the list on the left and either click on the
-    name or press the space bar.  Edit the account name and press <key>Enter</key>
-    when you’re finished.</p>
+    <p>To change the name that identifies the account in the <gui>Messaging and
+    VoIP Accounts</gui> window, select the account from the list on the left
+    and either click on the name or press the space bar. Edit the account name
+    and press <key>Enter</key> when you’re finished.</p>
   </note>
-
 </page>